Friday, February 5, 2010

55 Words-Jumbled

I am again thankful to waystationone for introducing me to 55 words.

Jumbled

The words appear in random form
Mixing up in my head.

Paper,  pen help to sort
Ideas that are jumbled.

One by one
They fall upon paper
With my pen making the marks.

Arranging and rearranging the words
Until I am satisfied.
I finally lay them down

Hoping someone reads the words
Despite rambling jumble.

40 Comments and Reactions:

Moooooog35 said...

I love the jumble in the newspaper!

That's all I got.

UberGrumpy said...

I read 'em!

Brian Miller said...

ha. its addictive and fun. nicely done. each time we write its like asking a girl to dance in high school. you hand her a small piece of your heart and hope she says yes...

*uncorked said...

Well played. My brain is in constant jumble.

Bossy Betty said...

Thanks for the ideas! I'm going to try this instead of cleaning my house!

Steven Anthony said...

well done! now what to do with the jumble in my head...

Grand Pooba said...

How fun, I'm going to stop working now and do this instead.

My boss will thank you.

Yankee Girl said...

This is great. I am going to give it a try.

Lola Lakely said...

What a fun excersise! I love reasons to procrastinate!

Lola Lakely said...

What a fun excersise! I love reasons to procrastinate!

Sophia's Mom said...

I had never heard of a 55 word jumble. Sounds like fun!

www.thewannabewahm.com

WhiteSockGirl aka The Fabulous Bitch said...

Too tired to jumble, I will procrastinate later!

Fab brilliant post!

MiMi said...

I love these 55 words ones...

Mass Hole Mommy said...

This is cool! Happy Friday follow btw. I have been here before, but I am now a follower!

Tara said...

Following your From Follow Friday! Would love to have you follow me too!

Also, come by and join our Follow Me Friday to get even more followers.

http://thetrendytreehouse.blogspot.com/2010/02/follow-me-fridays.html

Have a wonderful weekend! Tara @ Trendy Treehouse

Blackberry Jam Cafe said...

This could be addictive! Stopped by from Friday Follow. Come see me sometime!
Susan

Deb said...

I'm new from friday follow. LOVE your blog name :)

cookinglady said...

Great blog I'm a new Friday Follow

♥ Katinka said...

Stopping by from SITS and wishing you a Happy Friday!!! :)

Annie said...

Following you from Friday Follow.

Nap Warden said...

Well written my dear:)

Anything Fits a Naked Man said...

I'm absolutely terrible at this, but I'm going to give it a try! Thanks for the challenge!

Betty Manousos:cutand-dry.blogspot.com said...

I could picture every single moment you described in your poem. That's tha magic of poems.
Betty xx

Allyson said...

This is exactly how I feel every time I sit down to blog....hence all the dots and sentences that start with "and". So how's the poem publishing business going? Have you heard anything back about the one you submitted a few weeks ago?

Peter Stone said...

Great 55, you've captured the very essence of the writing process. I throw all these thoughts down when preparing a post or short story, and five drafts later...

My 55 is here

~Kristen~ said...

Happy Friday Follow! Great blog! I am now following you. Hope you come by and follow me, too

Captain Dumbass said...

I read them, and I'm all about rambling jumbles.

yonca said...

Very cool! I 'm following you.Happy Friday Follow!

Melissa B. said...

Oh, you are SUCH the artiste!

Simply Stacie said...

Following you from the Friday Follow!

http://stacievaughansblog.blogspot.com

Queen Beth said...

Hi! I'm your latest follower from Friday Follow! Look forward to reading more of you! :)

G-Man said...

Well obviously 31 er 32 people have read your jumble, and it's GREAT!
Excellent First Time 55 My Dear!
I hope you found this to be creative, challenging, and FUN!!
Please join us again next Friday because YOU ROCK Baby!
Thanks for visiting and playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End..G

Richard @ The Bewildered Brit said...

Awesome! That was lovely, put a smile on my face! :D

Ronda Laveen said...

Great Vodka Jumble Logic here. Welcome to 55. Nicely done.

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Debbie said...

Very, very good. My mind is always full of jumble.

Midday Escapades said...

Thanks for linking up with Friday Follow! I am now your blog follower. Happy weekend!

~ Lynn
http://www.middayescapades.com

p.s. Happy SITS Saturday Sharefest!

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MONICA-LnP said...

nice job with the words!
stopping by from Sits Saturday Sharefest!

magda said...

you no longer have to hope....you cannot stop us. actually, i was stopped for a few days. i don't know if it was blogger or google or my computer but no blogger pages would open for me.

went bra shopping last week for the first time in a while and remembered your post. it sucked and took forever. it was not clear and simple. if one size was too small, it was no guarantee that the next would work out. so i seemed unsympathetic at the time, i have changed my tune.